A Mother’s Journey

In early dawn, she tends her nest,
Soft hums escape, her love expressed.
Each step she takes, a silent test.

Her hands, though worn, weave comfort best,
Through winding paths, she does not rest.
In early dawn, she tends her nest.

With watchful eyes at night's request,
She guards the dreams where young ones nest.
Each step she takes, a silent test.

The seasons shift, east to west,
Her courage blooms, though oft suppressed.
In early dawn, she tends her nest.

In trials, her spirit's never guessed,
A stoic heart within her chest.
Each step she takes, a silent test.

Through years, her journey manifests,
Her children rise, their lives progressed.
In early dawn, she tends her nest,
Each step she takes, a silent test.

Meaning

A Mother’s Journey poem reflects the enduring and selfless nature of motherhood. The villanelle captures the repetitive, yet essential duties a mother performs from dawn till dusk, illustrating her tireless commitment through the motif of ‘nesting.’ The recurring early morning scenes and the steadfast tests reflect the cyclical and challenging aspects of raising children, emphasizing resilience and unwavering love. The poem portrays motherhood not just as a role but as a profound journey of growth and silent sacrifices.

Inspiration Behind

I imagined a mother as the central figure of my poem, symbolizing strength and dedication. Her days start early, caring for her family, embodying a resilience that’s both inspiring and deeply moving. The image of her tending to her nest felt like a perfect metaphor for her daily life—constant, attentive, and filled with love. I see her in every mother who, despite exhaustion, manages to hum a tune of comfort to soothe her children. These images, vivid and emotive, pushed me to write this villanelle.